Ron, The hierarchies need a little work still. The 3rd poster with the yellow bands is a strong direction because the two bands' first message could be "217 Full". The upper white band is trapped space and serves no purpose so I'd delete it. The type between 217 and Full needs more organization. "Always" seems in the way on all three designs. Could it go left of Full (with FULL moved slight right?) Type hierarchies: Could the text associated with the numbers be smaller and "in need of help" be larger? Which is the stronger point? Whichever direction you go with color (bands or not), it needs to be consistent with the rest of the package. Good luck.
Ron,
ReplyDeleteThe hierarchies need a little work still. The 3rd poster with the yellow bands is a strong direction because the two bands' first message could be "217 Full". The upper white band is trapped space and serves no purpose so I'd delete it. The type between 217 and Full needs more organization. "Always" seems in the way on all three designs. Could it go left of Full (with FULL moved slight right?)
Type hierarchies: Could the text associated with the numbers be smaller and "in need of help" be larger? Which is the stronger point?
Whichever direction you go with color (bands or not), it needs to be consistent with the rest of the package. Good luck.